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 }\paraspace[0,0,10,10]\pad[10,10,10,10]\fgcol[#222222]\bgcol[#ffffff]\fontsize[40]{\bold{}Hi there, welcome to \bold{Colloquium}!}
-\fontsize[16]It looks like this is the first time you've used Colloquium.  This document will help you understand a little bit about how Colloquium works and how to use it.
-Colloquium works differently to most other presentation programs. Instead of treating slides as the most important objects, Colloquium makes \italic{narrative }the centre of attention.  Slides come when you need to illustrate something.  This window is called the \oblique{narrative editor}.  Your slides are embedded into the narrative text, like this:
+\fontsize[16]It looks like this is the first time you've used Colloquium.  Keep reading to understand a little bit about how Colloquium works and how to use it.
+Colloquium works differently to other presentation programs. Colloquium makes \italic{narrative, not slides,} the centre of attention.  Slides come when you need to illustrate something.  This window is called the \oblique{narrative editor}.  Your slides are embedded into the narrative text, like this:
 \slide{
 \prestitle{Presentation title!}
 \f[836.7ux156.5u+100.3+565.5]{hel\fontsize[40]{lo?}}
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 \slidetitle{Here is the slide title!}
 \footer{}
 \f[425.5ux85.0u+456.3+513.9]{Close this window when you've finished editing...}\f[915.5ux78.1u+58.0+126.6]{Editing slides works how you expect it to.  Add a new text frame by dragging from an empty area.  Then simply type into the new frame.}\f[454.3ux139.3u+142.6+295.8]{Click and drag frames to move them, and change their shape and size by dragging the handles at the corners.}\f[0.0ux1.0u+809.1+430.0]{}}
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 You can add a new slide from the "Insert" menu or using the toolbar at the top of the narrative window.  Try it now: click to place the cursor at the end of this paragraph, then add a new slide.
 What is the narrative window for?  Well, it's up to you!  Here are some suggestions:
 \bp{}Use it just to help plan a smooth flow for your talk, reading it through to spot awkward transitions.